This semester has been a long and tedious but overall great time for me, especially in my Media Criticism course. We learned many different theories and ways of looking at the media so that we become critical and not just simply passive. Throughout the semester we were asked to write blogs pertaining to the things we learned in class and use examples of the media that we are fans of or critics of. I found this method of teaching and learning as a fun and excellent way to get the whole class involved.
For our final blog we were asked to read three of our classmates blogs and give feedback like we would get when our assignment was graded. Were asked to look at the things we liked about the blog, and disliked but more importantly leaving feedback that could help the blogger improve for the next time they decide to blog.
I looked at three fellow students blogs and this is what I thought….
Response to Breyana Franklin
I must say for someone who isn’t a fan of the Bad Girls Club phenomena personally I loved your blog. I do not watch the show and for me you explained what the show is all about perfectly, u showed how it related to some shows that people might watch as a comparison, which I though was genius. I do watch the Real World and your examination on how the shows might be the same made me get a better picture of what to expect to see from the show. I like how you explained how the ladies are picked and what they go through for the amount of time they are on the show. One thing I would point out is that these REALITY TV SHOWS… are actually not so real and the producers make the cast members do thing that cause drama for those people who are not aware of that aspect of Reality TV.
I like how you broke the show up using the three approaches to narrative analysis, you showed how they used the camera in the Visualist approach to capture the drama and intensify it for the viewer. While the structuralist approach showed us how the show moved on through out the season n episode. I like how you used easy language that everyone who was reading the blog could understand and how you went into each of the theorist that are involved with the narrative analysis section of the diamond.
Overall I believe you did a great job, the one thing I would of done different is I would of liked to see you maybe look at the season and see how the structuralist approach worked in that aspect of things, that way we would have been able to see one approach in full working order rather than seeing three in less light. But Great Job!
Response to Nathalie Diadhiou
Hi Natalie!!! I loved your second blog!!! It was really interesting to use the theories that we have been taught on the gossip and entertainment would that we live in today. I am familiar with the Beyonce baby bump rumors and found it relatable and fun to examine. You did an excellent job using the social construction of reality and Beyonce baby bump! I would of never thought when normally looking at a pregnant Beyonce picture that she served as a perfect example of semiotics. I liked how you showed how the semiotics could be explained by looking at the picture of Beyonce baby bump.
The pregnancy symbolizing fertility was a great example of signifier, I also like how u went to show how motherhood would be the final result and how that was also a signifier. I would of never thought to put the paparazzi and media as an example or something leading to the example of signification, which is also in semiotics. I believed you showed parts of semiotics that I would of passed over or forgotten which was the example of POLYALENCE. You explained it well so anyone could understand and for those who knew it wasn’t too much explaining where we got annoyed from a lesson.
You used great embedded media I loved the TMZ video and the Wendy Williams clip, I can tell u are up on your media gossip! The use of the pictures and the explanation of what were in that picture all helped for those who don’t know who Beyonce is. Kudos on your work you did Great
Response to Mariela Cruz
I loved Disney as a child and you made me go back to that time when all things came easy and I didn’t have to worry about anything and all things ended in happiness. You saying the same thing made a connection between us which I believe is something that’s great for the reader to have to connect with the blogger so kudos on that aspect of the blog. Secondly I like how you were conversational with the reader made it easy and comfortable to read about a subject they might not necessarily like.
The transition to the actually assignment I saw could use come help or better flow into it, however the way you did it was nice just a little choppy. When you explained what ideology was you did it a clear and concise way so everyone would understand. Your connection with ideological criticism and Disney was an amazing way to show the readers what it is with out having to teach them a full lesson. I liked how you included the Mickey Mouse Monopoly I used it in my blog also it served as a perfect example of how Disney targets the children n parents who consume their products. They way stereotypes are shown in each of the movies was a perfect thing to add to get the reader thinking and asking question you lead the student to many important things that all consumers should think of.
Overall you did an amazing job, with some addition of more examples I believe the assignment could have been that much better.
Here’s a link to show people how to get to Disney!!! http://disneyworld.disney.go.com/












































